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They were walking down the street.They hated each other so much. She wants to kill him and he wants to kill her. But they had a reason for hate.The reason was Luke. Luke Hemmings.He wants to be with her, but she doesn't wants the same.So she was with Mickey. So Luke hated Mickey and Mickey hated her 'cause because of her he losted best friend. And she hates Mickey, because he was rude to her. But they stay together 'cause Luke hated Mickey, so Mickey hated Luke and she wanted to make Luke jealous 'cause he had a hot night with her and he wanted more but she doesn't so he hurt her. They both wanted to make Luke jealous. How will this end?
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Tole je moj fanfiction.Pač kot ste verjetno ugotovili bo zgodba v anglešči, glavne osebe pa bodo Michael Clifford(Mickey), Luke Hemmings in neko dekle.Drgač bo mel pol ful pomembno vlogo tut Niall Horan.In mogoč angleščina ne bo čist pravilna.

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25. oktober 2014
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26. oktober 2014
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u172703
Ta next je posvečen prvi bralki Ashton `s love.
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Chapter 1:The Past

Luke was smiling. She looked at him. He was so cute. But she knew he only wants sex with her. She was just one of the thousands girls. She was just another doll for him. "So, Kate do you wanna do this or not?" She doesn't knew what to say. Luke didn't wants to wait. He just started it. A hot night begins. After one hour she doesn't wants more.But he wants more,so he grab what he wants. She was crying.

That's what happends this night.The most horrible night in her life.
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Mickey is looking at Kate.And than he asks :"Are you OK?" "Yes,I'm alright. I was just thinking about that night."Mickey say OK and than nobody speak anymore. They just fall asleep on the couch.
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26. oktober 2014
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19. februar 2015
Preden začneš pisat v ang, se nauč govort po angleško. Sori ker težim, sam sm mal občutljiva na to, ker mi gre angleščina zlo dobr in kr kurjo polt dobim k kdo narobe kej napiše. Upam, da ni nič narobev če sem ti napake popravla. Tuki je popravljeno:

Luke was smiling. She looked at him. He was so cute. But she knew he only wants sex with her. She was just one of the thousands girls. She was just another doll for him. "So, Kate do you wanna do this or not?" She didn't know what to say. Luke didn't want to wait. He just started it. A hot night began. After one hour she didn't want more.But he wanted more,so he grabbed what he wanted. She was crying.

That's what happened that night.The most horrible night of her life.
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Mickey is looking at Kate.And than he asks :"Are you OK?" "Yes,I'm alright. I was just thinking about that night."Mickey says OK and than nobody speaks anymore. They just fall asleep on the couch.
Pa a boš to pisala (vrjetn ne boš več k nisi nč naprej pol objavla) v pretekliku al sedanjiku? K prvi del je bil v pretekliku, drugi pa v sedanjiku
26. januar 2016
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